Inflation scene from ongoing story.

As mentioned in the writer's forum (does anyone go there?) I have been posting an ongoing chapter story called "Take It All In" at these locations:

http://www.dimensionsmagazine.com/forums/showthread.php?t=119280

http://www.process-productions.com/forum/showthread.php?t=40272

The story involves a competition of size between one character going through scientifically assisted weight gain, and another going through a magical expansion that allows her to hold in everything she eats, breathes, or even absorbs through her skin.  The most recent chapter involves a scene of straight forward body inflation so I thought I'd offer it here to hopefully whet your appetites:

“Don’t fall again, because there’s no way we can get you up if you get any bigger,” Amber panted.

“I didn’t fall, I was pushed,” Dawn said shooting Etna an accusatory eye.  “And don’t worry… soon… I’ll be able… to roll… myself upright.”  Dawn paused involuntarily between her words while a queer expression came upon her face.

“What’s the matter?” a concerned Lydia asked as her sister made odd convulsions.

“I feel… a burp coming.”

Knocking Dawn around shook up her insides and turned her stomach into a churning ocean. Dawn was overcome by an unpleasant gassy feeling as her body tried to sort out the barrage of food and drink that had been forced upon it the last few hours.  Opening her mouth repeatedly like a gaping fish, Dawn was desperate for a burp to relieve the discomfort, but one wouldn’t come.  Realizing she was still a one way street of consumption, Dawn feared the spell wouldn’t let it out.  She tried to pound a fist against her chest to help it along, but Dawn’s arms were now so short and rounded that it was like trying to fold an ultra-plush pillow.  Her fists could do little but hang uselessly off in the distance.  

Noticing the problem, Lydia moved behind Dawn and gave her a few pats on the back.  Realizing there was no longer any need to be so gentle with Dawn, she gave her broad backside a more forceful pounding.  Dawn’s mouth opened wide as her sister’s blows seemed to working.  

A deep gurgling rose up through Dawn.  She felt all a tingle as an effervescent welling filled every inch of her body like a billion tiny bubbles fizzing wildly.  Lydia gave her another good whack and it was if all those bubbles suddenly burst at once.  This triggered a kind of release, but not in the form of a burp.  Dawn’s whole body puffed up.  

“Whoah,” Lydia exclaimed as her sister’s sudden bloat pushed her back against the wall.  

“Whoah is right,” Dawn repeated.  She’d gotten used to expanding but this… this was inflating.  Dawn had just experienced size for the simple sake of size- an increase with no additional weight.  “I’m… I’m blowing up like a balloon!” Dawn cried out in joy as her burbling insides caused her to puff up even more.  

With the dispersing gasses continuing to aerate within Dawn, it was as if an unseen breath was blowing into her.  Dawn felt like the plaything of another.  She’d long dreamed of being inflated- to fill, stretch, and swell like a balloon- and more than anything else Dawn had experienced today, this was precisely it.

“Oh wow- that was… that was… I don’t know what that was, but…” Dawn couldn’t have been more pleased by this new development, though- as per usual- she found she could always do with a bit more.  Imagining herself like a fizzing can of carbonated soda, Dawn vigorously shook and jostled the great tank of her tummy: up, down, back, and forth- all while oblivious to the pummeling poor Lydia was taking behind her.  A turgid storm quickly began brewing within and Dawn was aflutter as she waited expectantly for the compounding chemical reactions inside of her to be expressed.  

Not a moment later it hit her.  “Y-Y-YES!” Dawn exclaimed as more gas dissipated and she was rewarded with a very satisfying and prolonged increase in size.  Freed from the burden of eating or drinking and unbound by clothing or other restrictions, Dawn was able to devote herself fully to this uniquely sensational form of growth.  With varying mixtures of awe and jealousy, the others watched Dawn give her whole mind and body over to the forces she’d called into play.  Such submission was repaid with pleasure that flew past orgasmic and brought Dawn to a state of divine rapture.  

“Bigger- yes- YES!  Make… me… BIGGER-R-R!  Grow, grow, GROW!” Dawn commanded her abiding body.  She shuddered as she expanded faster than ever.  Her circumference magnified- an inch, two inches, three then four.  Bigger, fuller, rounder, Dawn was being blown up like a blimp.  She was filling up and yet never felt full.  She was stretching outward but wasn’t wearing thin.  Dawn was just becoming more.  Her great and growing torso lifted her stubby arms up involuntarily higher and pushed her nearly non-existent legs even further apart.  

Though it was difficult for her to know where to look, it hardly mattered for wherever her head was turned, Dawn’s periphery was taken up with more and more of her inflating body.  

“This… just won’t stop being amazing,” a winded Dawn exclaimed when her growth finally subsided and she rested a cheek against her expanded form.

A rattled Lydia failed to share her enthusiasm as she gasped from behind, “Um.. yeah, little sis…”  Tightly sandwiched between Dawn and the wall, she pleaded for her miniature Zeppelin of a sibling to unmoor herself, “…if you wouldn’t mind.”

“Oh, sorry…“ Dawn apologized, but couldn’t help but pause for the briefest moment to take in the sensation of her big sister’s body pressed against her sprawling form.  Lydia felt so… small.  The body she’d long been jealous of was for the most part, enveloped by her own until Dawn wobbled forward and set her free.

Moving had become all the more awkward and slow, but Dawn took the time to turn back to her adversary as she shook her head and tsk-tsked.  “I should be angry at you for giving me the heave-ho, but as you can see…” Dawn paused as she brought her freshly expanded body in closer to grant Etna a better look, “I make the most of any situation.  Either way, I take it you’re convinced?”