I've done colouring on 'normal' pieces yes. But I am still learning. Thanks for the compliment. Any criticisms?
About to Burst Pics
Here are some pictures, perhaps doodles is the better word, that I did recently and put up on a yahoo group I whipped up.
http://f1.grp.yahoofs.com/v1/oAKITQyuqVXXHsDcAZKxQNDIOtouMtCIU6TfCIFxjsG-HDKYrorr7DmrffOtP4OQPJdgnfJUY9HKVRPltM-tEg/Gal%20Burster%27s%20Art/About%20to%20Burst.jpg
http://f1.grp.yahoofs.com/v1/oAKITS3r8kPXHsDcf_fZ2vfPdqzGmDXqUgwQcGMqgkZFSADe0cYtemgO1LrZsi0px5eD1scEUJfXZDpAfllozg/Gal%20Burster%27s%20Art/About%20to%20Burst2.jpg
http://f1.grp.yahoofs.com/v1/oAKITV6i5HvXHsDcaY9tAK5JTrbZIJbDhhlEkRIC0OAcN6osUtwQQw8_Ggd26At4k2ujzDURuruGi5nbyRfDfg/Gal%20Burster%27s%20Art/About%20to%20Burst3.jpg
http://f1.grp.yahoofs.com/v1/oAKITZNJvDbXHsDc6ldL7h6YiX0zMVTBD9Wx1nbodmokKYa9Zr0HMbOqmYx-Pp5OLSatPhEqm7ZK_NwbG26KOA/Gal%20Burster%27s%20Art/About%20to%20Burst4.jpg
I'm an aspiring inflation artist and writer and decided to whip up a group instead of opening a DA account or posting here. Actually, I don't know why I didn't post these anywhere else.
I would appreciate some brutal honest criticism. Suggestions for improvement. Or even ideas. So, yeah. Thanks for any comments.
Okay, I created a DA account and put up my, now four pics and two stories. I would still love any criticism. Constructive, brutal, complimentary, yeah. It would be nice to improve my future work.
http://galburster.deviantart.com/
Thanks.
Tue, 03/22/2011 - 03:31
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Tue, 03/22/2011 - 05:22
#4
oscar4111
Links to the images didn't work for me. Which group did you put them in?
Tue, 03/22/2011 - 06:03
#5
My group called bursting_party.
Tue, 03/22/2011 - 09:15
#6
Yeah image links are not working for me either.
Tue, 03/22/2011 - 10:49
#7
doubleintegral
Maybe you have to be logged into a Yahoo account to see the images.
Tue, 03/22/2011 - 11:44
#8
it's easy enough to follow the www link in gal_burster's signature area - then go to files
Tue, 03/22/2011 - 14:51
#9
Fleetingsanity
I had a look they're good drawings not my thing though. I'm not a fan of balloon or popping myself but your art is good.
Tue, 03/22/2011 - 16:46
#10
Thanks for the comment even though my work is not your cup of tea sanity.
And perhaps putting them into a yahoo group was not the most convenient thing to do. Sorry to those having trouble.
Tue, 03/22/2011 - 19:28
#11
I like the pics... they have a very simple and purist quality to them.
Wed, 03/23/2011 - 02:47
#12
Fleetingsanity
You ever think about getting a deviantart account burster most expansion artist post there now. That or Hentai foundry.
Wed, 03/23/2011 - 05:05
#13
I've thought about it... I don't think Hentai foundry. But maybe I will upload it to deviantart. Is that a good idea? No banning or anything?
Wed, 03/23/2011 - 11:05
#14
doubleintegral
DeviantArt is fine.
Wed, 03/23/2011 - 16:41
#15
Saw the pics, they are really cool. Then I found your DA page and read your latest story, it was really good. I love the emotion behind it.
Wed, 03/23/2011 - 16:46
#16
Thank you scorpious. I wanted to do something I hadn't seen before, but was worrying about being flat or cliche.
Wed, 03/23/2011 - 17:28
#17
Not at all. It was a really good story, fetish material aside, even though that part was just as good.
Thu, 08/25/2011 - 01:30
#18
Phraxus
Hmmm... Looks like his DA account is gone.
Thu, 08/25/2011 - 01:34
#19
JSK00
Yeah, he's now known as alorok. He's also put up some new work there, if you're interested.
Thu, 11/03/2011 - 07:03
#20
Mmmmmm, popping...
Hey, those are pretty good. Do you do coloring as well?
Stories I have written