Gassy ship

A One Piece drawing to illustrate my story "The gassiest ship in the Grand Line" (avalaible here http://wendigoskin.deviantart.com/gallery/#/d310oho and also on this site).
It shows Nami hugely inflated by all the Coke she had to drink in the story; here it is http://wendigoskin.deviantart.com/gallery/#/d312v9m

What do you think of this picture? I know it's a bit gross, but you must forgive me, I'm not very good. Do you find it interesting?
Furthermore, would you mind telling me your opinions about the story?

latecomer

HI WendigoSkin, Latecomer here.

I checked out your gallery and I'm afraid it's not my style. Do you use a computer to draw on? I suspect it takes a lot of skill to get something "realistic" looking to happen on a computer. I'm strictly a pencil-and-paper guy myself, and I would like to see you try something strictly in black and white: pencil on paper, drawn by hand. It's not that hard ;-)

I'm going to check out your stories next-

Best regards

Latecomer

WendigoSkin

Yes, I do. I only use Paint. But don't worry, I've stopped drawing long ago.