A common theme in Carnatic's stories is the exploding. Something else similar to this is the "float away" scenario. Has he written anything like it?
Has Carnatic Written a Float Away Story
Tue, 06/27/2006 - 03:06
#1
Has Carnatic Written a Float Away Story
Wed, 06/28/2006 - 01:49
#3
darth_clone19
Cant wait.
Its like you write it, and then go "I cant pass this up. Im gonna pop her!" lol
Wed, 06/28/2006 - 03:22
#4
Remotes was great. Can't wait to see the next part. Your stories are great in general.
Wed, 06/28/2006 - 04:32
#5
I love it when the floating away has a lot of suspense and suddenness, just like popping. Like if the victim gets inflated more and more until they're way, way lighter than air... then, all of a sudden... the victim can't hold on any more? someone lets go of the string? the rope breaks? the upward pressure makes them slip off the hose or valve? Well, I guess that's for the author to decide! =)
Wed, 06/28/2006 - 07:25
#6
I love float aways...I can just see the look on their face as it happens.
Thu, 06/29/2006 - 01:43
#7
This thread inspired me to write a bit, but the end product doesn't have any body inflation -- only balloons. You can find it on the ballooninflation and heliumballoonfetish yahoo groups, under the title "Kari's Party Bouquet".
Thu, 06/29/2006 - 06:29
#8
Floating is great! If you decide to do a float-away, it will be interesting to see what you come up with Carnatic! I see where you are coming from though, sometimes you have your mind set on a particular scenario and then everything can change in the middle. Something where the blimp girl ends up floating away, not knowing where (or if) she'll come down. *g*
Thu, 06/29/2006 - 06:29
#9
Floating is great! If you decide to do a float-away, it will be interesting to see what you come up with Carnatic! I see where you are coming from though, sometimes you have your mind set on a particular scenario and then everything can change in the middle. Something where the blimp girl ends up floating away, not knowing where (or if) she'll come down. *g*
Thu, 06/29/2006 - 12:01
#10
Yes... well it's cos I always feel somethings missing (for me anyway) if I don't put an explosion in it... but with Remotes there are multiple inflations, so I can have my cake AND eat it.
Fri, 06/30/2006 - 02:01
#11
darth_clone19
I agree Blown Up.
But too bad your story is with just baloons instead of balloon people.
No... I'm ashamed to admit that while I like other themes and keep meaning to do a float away, whenever I come to write something I like exploding so much I end up doing that instead... though I have done a couple where the inflatee floated then exploded...
keep an eye open for the next installment of Remotes though ;)