i have an story idea for an all fem charlie and the chocolate factory fanfiction

i have an story idea for an all fem charlie and the chocolate factory fanfiction that i think some of you guys might like to use 

i even have a fan cast for it 

Natalie portman as Wilma wonka 

emma watson as Charlotte Buckett 

Helena Bonham Carter as Mrs. Bucket

Nikki Blonsky as Augst Gloop 

Melissa McCarthy Mrs Gloop 

AnnaSophia Robb as Violet Beauregarde

Missi Pyle as Mrs. Beauregarde

Julia Winter as Veruca Salt

Lena Headey as Mrs salt 

Maisie Williams as Milly Teavee

Kaley Cuoco as Miss teavee 

Chloë Grace Moretz as oompa loompas

Charlotte Buckett is a kind and loving girl living in poverty with her single mother. Wilma Wonka announces a contest whereby the first five children that find Golden Tickets hidden in Wonka bars will be given a tour of the factory and one a chance to be presented with an unknown grand prize. Four tickets are quickly found: the greedy and gluttonous August Gloop and her equally fat bbw mother from Düsseldorf; the spoiled and rotten Veruca Salt and her milf cougar gold digging model mother from Buckinghamshire; the competitive and boastful Violet Beauregarde and her mother from Atlanta; and the arrogant and aggressive Milly Teavee and her dumb blond airhead bimbo mother from Denver. Charlotte and her mother find the fifth while Charlotte was eating a chocolate bar. 

When they all meet up on the day of the tour, Charlotte and her mother get along very well with August and her mother who insist on sharing all their chocolate with the two thin and skinny girls to feed them up a bit. Wonka greets the ticket winners at the factory gates. The Chocolate Room is the first room shown in Wilma Wonka's factory. The whole room is made to resemble a meadow, except made entirely out of candy. they also meet the Oompa-Loompas , an all female race come from Loompaland, which is a region of Loompa, a small isolated island in the Atlantic Ocean. The Oompa-Loompas would end up being preyed upon or attacked by Whangdoodles, Hornswogglers and Snozzwangers, which also lived there. Wilma Wonka ended up inviting them to work at the Factory and get away from their natural predators. and are paid in their favourite food, cocoa beans, which were extremely rare in their island as well as with chocolate and candy (she also uses them as taste testers) a result they have grown quite fat and plump working at the factory . Charlotte, her mother and Wilma stuff themselves silly and plump up quite alot and get very big food babies (causing a button to pop off each of their shirts ) meanwhile August and her mother binge on the candy and chocolate becoming fatter and fatter. They then start drinking from the Chocolate Room’s Chocolate River causing them to become even fatter and to fill up like big fat chocolate water balloons , and end up rolling into the Chocolate River causing the group to panic except for Wilma who calmly points out that fat floats as the two float down the Chocolate River drinking more and more chocolate filling up fatter and fatter , they both then get sucked up two pipes but get stuck and the Oompa-Loompas sing a sneering song about them , the pressure shoots them up the pipe to the factory's Fudge Room, while they sail on a boat down the river. 

Milly asks why August and her mother got so fat. Wilma explains by demonstrating on herself, Charlotte and her mother by using a laydel to fill three cups with chocolate from the river which they drink , they almost instantly begin to gain weight and their bellies expand too giving them a muffin top and causing another button pops off their shirts (also throughout the tour Wilma shares chocolate bars with Charlotte and her mother causing the three of them to gain alot of weight and become fatter and fatter it also causes the buttons on their shirts to pop off one by one ). Wilma explains that the melted choclate is very fattening.

Next, they come to The Inventing Room Secret and most important inventions of candy and room in the entire Factory. It holds all of Wilma Wonka's newest inventions and candy that still needs testing. she shows them The Three Course Dinner Chewing Gum is a piece of gum invented by Wilma Wonka that feeds a person almost like they're really eating dinner. the gum has not yet been perfected, but Violet and her mother have a piece each but when they tastes the Blueberry Pie and Ice Cream, a small blue dot forms on their noses. It slowly grows over their faces turning their eyes and hair blue along with their skin, they begin swelling in the waist and cheeks and butts and breasts and soon inflates to a complete ball, then grow into a huge blueberries and grow to elephantine proportions, almost reaching the catwalks of the Inventing Room, up to the point that their tracksuits can no longer fit and begins rip and tear and their zippers give way embarrassing and humiliating them. Violet's mother grows bigger then Violet , by this point they have begun to leak blueberry juice and their breast have begun lactating juice as well. Wilma tells them the girls need to be juiced before they explode. This causes Wonka to have the Oompa-Loompas roll them to the Juicing Room to have them juiced like cows , as the Oompa-Loompas roll them away they sing another song To add insult to injury, some began to use them like giant circus balls as they sang their song. The Ooompa Loompas bounced over Violet's mother's ample bosom as they made it look more like a hurdle game than trekking over her. Sometimes they would springboard off her breasts as if they were in the Olympics. 

After that, They go to the egg room next where giant geese that lay special golden chocolate cream eggs. Veruca and her mother demand and golden chocolate cream egg but Wilma says no. Veruca and her mother grabs two bad eggs and they both greedily wolf them down. They slowly start to puff up as bodies fill with cream and blow up like cream fill blimps causing them burst out of their clothes embarrassing and humiliating them , Wilma warns that they will explode if they keep filling with cream and has the Oompa-Loompas roll them away to have the cream squeezed out of them , the Oompa-Loompas sing another humiliating song . 

Then they go to the tv room where Wilma show's them Wonkavision which transports and shrinks a giant wonka bar onto a tv which Charlotte reaches into and pulls out ,Charlotte , her mother and Wilma (all of whom are very chubby by this point and have love handles ) each have small piece of the bar. Milly is shrunk down to a few inches in height after being the first person transported by Wonka's new television advertising invention. while they wait for milly to appear on the tv her mother nervously eats the whole bar , Wilma has the Ooompa Loompas force feed Milly chocolate to blow her back up to her original size around this time that Charlotte , her mother and Wilma and Milly's mother begin to gain weight causing yet another button to pop off their shirts , Wilma explains that it's a side effect of the transport that the bar thought small this has the calories of a giant bar as Milly's mother gains weight then the rest of them and embarrassing bursts and rips out of her clothes as she led off . 

They go to the Fizzy Lifting Drinks Room next where Charlotte , her mother and Wilma end up drinking Fizzy Lifting Drink by accident and blowing up like huge blimps ( just like aunt Marge from harry potter and the prisoner of azkaban ) this time all their buttons to pop off and burst out of their clothes , they begin to floats to the roof Wilma warns that if they inflating they will explode like overblown parade floats ,Charlotte and her mother begin to panic however Wilma remains calm and calls the Oompa-Loompas who give them gas-X tablets at which point their balloon bellies begin to rumble and shake violently, Charlotte and her mother begin to panic thinking they gonna blow however they just start letting out huge loud farts and burps causing them to slowly deflate and get new clothes Wonka then tells Charlotte that her actual prize is the factory itself; Wonka created the contest to find a child honest and worthy enough to be her heir. Charlotte and her mother will live in the factory immediately and take over its operation when Wonka retires . They celebrate with a big tall glass of chocolate from the chocolate river which causing their bodies begins to expand because of the chocolate causing the buttons on their dress to burst off and their huge bellies to spill out much to their amusement they then watch the others go .

August and her mother are now sbbw size and covered in melted chocolate and licking their fingers to remove the adherent chocolate and are now addicted to chocolate and the mere taste now causes huge sexual arousal. once they get home things get a little bit kinky as they strip off their clothes and lick the chocolate off their nude bodies and binges on their life time supply of chocolate and get jobs taste testing chocolate at the factory .

Violet and her mother after they are juiced the girls are still blue and have a lot of water weight and are retaining juice and still puffy they binge on their life time supply of chocolate and enter themselves in county fairs and eating contests and become sumos .

Veruca and her mother are still puffy from the cream and they binge on their life time supply of chocolate and become bbw nymphomaniac porn stars and become morbidly obese. 

Milly and her mother are now sbbw size they spent the rest of their lives watching tv and eating chocolate and become morbidly obese and immobile.

Charlotte , her mother and Wilma live fat and happy for rest of their days in the factory. 

hope you like it and it's not too long 

please tell me what you think ?

Margeret Moonlught
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I cri everytim

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Auriga
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 "WANNA SEE ME DRINK THIS GUY?!" - is this a reference of some kind of wore?

Margeret Moonlught
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It's a Dragonball Z Abridged reference. Cell says it before he drinks this guy.

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mman

Nothing terribly orriginal, but certainly not bad. Could be very interesting if given the right level of detail.

CobaltSnake
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The ending was a bit lackluster imo. I think something should happen to charlotte at the end, and you shouldn't fatten her up at all before that moment.

I think I've had too much...

mewmew666

ok what would you change or add ?

also what did you guys think of the fan cast ?

mewmew666

i've started writing it up 

http://mewmew666.deviantart.com/art/Charlotte-and-the-Chocolate-Factory-chapter1-667467603

http://mewmew666.deviantart.com/art/Charlotte-and-the-Chocolate-Factory-chapter2-668125460

what do you guys think so far ?