It worked fairly well actually. The first person story telling helped allot getting the reader involved in the story. I was a file that was downloaded onto your pc to play. However that was on my last laptop and the person who posted it has either deleted their account or changed their name. I have been kicking around the idea of making one myself. A choose your adventure inflation story. With the main character being burst or bursting others to survive. Maybe I will write up a script and see how things play out.
Looking for a "Choose your adventure inflation story"
Hello! I am writing here in the hopes of getting a little help finding a particular story. I think it was called "inflation demo arena". You are a prisoner chosen to take part in an inflation fight fighting another prisoner. The idea is two women go in and one leaves, the other bursts. I really enjoyed reading it and getting to the different endings. Some have you win the battle and others have you loosing and making a mess in the arena. I was hoping someone here had a copy of the file or knew where there was a copy floating around on the internet.
Tue, 12/20/2016 - 11:33
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Fri, 12/23/2016 - 17:44
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firnov
Well. Its always good to give it a try. I wonder what its gona be like to play as the faith of the main character, it gives it a bit of a video-game feeling.
I hope you can work it out as you planed to to do it. That you can blow back new life in this type of stories
I am always a big fan of duels or games in inflation stories. So this can be a good read. But more or less, i dont know how you will wirk out the first person view in this story. Its a hard thing to do.
Meby you can do a mix of first and thirth person view. You arnt the character yourself, but yu know what she is thinking and doing
And boom goes the inflatee