I've posted them in the library, and would welcome any critisism.
Just started writing some inflatable clothing stories feedback wanted
Fri, 02/01/2013 - 09:04
#1
Just started writing some inflatable clothing stories feedback wanted
Sat, 02/02/2013 - 14:47
#3
its magnific...pleace more inflatable clothing storys... :)
Mon, 02/04/2013 - 09:02
#4
RubberKat,
I would like to say that I GREATLY enjoyed your story "The Shoot", as suit inflation is always a sure winner with me. For any artists out there, I would thoroughly love to see illustrations accompanying this story. I look forward to more from you.
Sat, 03/09/2013 - 22:54
#5
I love them all keep going with the stories
quick comments on The Shoot- good story line, first person POV is good, try breaking up your longer sentences into shorter ones so a paragraph of text has perhaps 5 separate sentences in it- all "on topic" for that paragraph; you can use the run-on construction later in the story for a paragraph or two when tension/urgency has built up and you want to speed up the rate of the story.
Write a little bit every day even if all you write are some idea sketches, plot summaries, fragments of descriptive prose, snippets of dialog, etc. and save what you write- then review, rewrite, and revise it the day after.
and above all... KEEP IT UP!
-Latecomer